The Night Captive: A Vampire Story
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Victor stood outside her window, his silhouette barely visible in the muted starlight. He spied her sleeping on her bed, the duvet rising and falling with each gentle breath, a living, sensuous mound of temptation and sustenance. In an instant he appeared inside the room. His every sense was heightened and her soft breathing filled his ears as though amplified one-hundred times, the slightest sough of the sheets a raging river of sound and chaos.
Slowly and silently he moved to her side
and stood there for hours admiring her form. She stirred a little but
did not wake. He could taste her in his mouth. Their divine and
sacred union was inevitable. He would have her. He must. He would
own her. It was his right. The line of her neck was smooth and
elegant, appearing from beneath her hair and disappearing under the
silken cover. Even in the dark her skin glowed in the little
available starlight, her delicious smoothness beckoning him to
her.
As he slowly leaned toward his prize, his lip curled to
reveal the two long teeth, glistening with saliva and lust. Just as
he got to within one inch of his feast, the beautiful woman startled,
but before she could scream his hand was on her mouth, calming her,
possessing her. She did not attempt to scream or free herself. She
could not. She was captured. A tiny bird held in the grip of a man.
Her breath deepened. His mouth moved closer, finally reaching her
flesh and biting into her skin, the two fangs plunging luxuriously
into her vein and sucking her lifeblood from her. The taste was earthy and sweet.
Her eyelids fluttered and she moaned as he pulled the duvet down, exposing her naked breasts. His hand touched her softness and explored her feminine perfection.
He took her blood faster now, and
her moans grew to cries and puffs of soulful air. She tensed and at
once was overtaken by a flood of love and ecstasy, washing away her
past, her childhood, her dreams, her very life up until this exact
moment. The past was meaningless.
Her life began here, now, on a bed under a duvet in the pale light, with a man stealing her essence. As she continued to helplessly pulse and writhe, she knew she belonged to him.
Victor, sensing she was near death,
withdrew his teeth from his delicious prey. He would let her live.
He had made her his and she belonged to him. They would walk forever
in shadows together. There was no hurry. Eternity was a long time.
(Photo by solofotone, flickr)
Part 2: The Night Captive: Blood Lust
- The Night Captive: Blood Lust
The tales of Victor continue. He is on the street, searching for tonight's victim. Perhaps his next "pet" will be you.
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Great writing Christoph...now I want to bite a neck. :)
LAmatadora: I don't know. I wish I knew..I'd get me some (of that elusive Vampire thing, I mean.) Thanks for the comment.
Tom Cornett: Thank you. Me too. Just so long as we don't bite each others.
Fab writing Christoph, I so love all Vampire stuff, and have done since I was a very young child. Must have watched most vampire stuff ever shown on TV or film, and have read many books. (All a pet love of mine).
Misty: Hi Stranger! Vampire's sure are popular right now, with the Twilight thing. Thanks for coming by and the comment!
Saw the Twilight film on my way back from Buenos Aires on the plane, excellent film, can't wait for the next one. Am back now, and will try not to be a stranger, but not had much time to write a lot lately as planting and weeding my huge new vegetable plot, plus my Mum just had a full knee replacement, so am taking a good few meals up to her and my Step Dad to help out. Hope to write more soon as I miss you guys :)
Misty: We miss you too. Sounds like you have your hands (and knees) full. Hurry back!
LOL, don't you worry, loads of ideas brewing in my imagination for new hubs, just need to sort Mum and veg plot out before I can act on them :) Am still reading all of my friends hubs as much as I can, even though it means some late nights.
Well, we'll be waiting.
BTW, congrats on the 100 hubscore :)
Thank you.
Hey Chris
Sexy is definitely back! You rock! And I'm looking forward to more of this darker, nights-in-white-satin-moody you :D
Hey Cris! Thanks a lot. I appreciate your comment!
Oh lord my heart is pounding, Edward Cullens has nothing on you. This is a dark and delicious side of you Christoph, I think you've been hiding from us. I will definitely be pay closer attention. I will also be sleeping with my window open and my neck bared!
Forbidden... Provocative... I like it... I like it a lot!
Randy: Thanks so much! Maybe I have a muse, hmm? Ever think about that? So...you'll be sleeping with your window open, eh? You wouldn't happen to have an airplane ticket, would you? I haven't learned to fly yet.
Azur Moon Wolf: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment!
"... glistening with saliva and lust." Too good.
You're the expert, Tom, so thank you very much indeed!
Great job Christoph! Very sexy, I loved it:)
I would happily amuse you Christoph. You probably don't know what you are toying with here. The appeal of a sexy vampire is unequaled. The idea of being "chosen" from a planet of entrees as a life mate, oh baby. And to be pleasured by a man, I use the term man loosely, that has a millennia of practice, holy crap. Ya, I'll definitely take some of that.
Thanks, MissJamieD! And see, didn't get your foot in your mouth once! Thanks for coming by!
Randy: You talkin' to me? There's no other vampires here.
Woah, woman! I should've started this vampire stuff a long time ago. Where do I sign? Where's my ticket?
Thank you for that luxurious comment! My little vampire heart's all pitty pat!
You have hit on a secret fetish of mine, however did you know? I won't stay long for I fear a stampeed of women is surely on my heels. But, VERY sexy and VERY stimulating. Thank You for this mind candy.
Well thank you. I'll always think of you as my first!
I think I've been lured into the imaginery world of wanton lust and things.
Jewels: Yes. I accept responsibility!
Well best there be a sequel, you just can't leave people hanging like this. You can't just lure and leave - not kosher.
Can I be the 'she' in your hub? LOL. I like it very much Christoph. Vampires, what's with them?
Jewels: I decide what is kosher. I'm sure you can imagine the rest. Ha, ha.
Sheena: If you wish to be the she, then go ahead. What IS up with Vampires?
Yeah, same here Sheenarobins! He can come visit me any time, as long as he doesn't kill me!
I always knew you were a bit batty...
It was the garlic douche wasn't it? :)
where would Christoph put his douche?
Are you sure you are not a vampire and we don't know about it? :::checking to see if all your hubs are written at night::::::: :) It was very sensual writing, got caught up in the story.
Mayhmong: Oh no. Never. You may live.
Spryte: Ha! Notice he never goes below her waist! Ha, ha!
Jewels: Oh, it's not MY douche!
Violet: I'm not sure of anything anymore. I woke at sundown in an oblong box. What's happening to me!
Erotic and yet a bit chilling...I used to be a real fan of vampire movies. When is the sequel?
I enjoyed reading this but why was this so short. Looks like you were not in the perfect mood to write because generally I find your Hub very detailed and very lengthy. Actually I was looking forward to more detailed description of the beauty of the sleeping beauty but still it was a good reading, it made me feel yo yo yo... ;)
I think he bit me on my lips while he was kissing and tasting, me, myself and I. It's bleeding now but I close my eyes and a shiver runs under my spine.
"Victor, come back to me my love. don't go to Patty, not yet! You are mine...all mine."
Wowee. Let's have that sequel!
First of all congrats on the 100 score. Btw are attractive women supposed to be the prize catch for Dracula since those women can get there victims much more easier than the sudden guerilla tactics that the Dracula employs ;)
Oh so yummy! Lust for blood, lust for feminine perfection, lust for lust...it's all good. :) This is a whole new delicious side of you that is as irresistible as the other side. I loved it!
I've been fascinated by the progression of vampires from being creepy to sexy. Remember Dark Shadows? Barnabas Collins was not sexy, although he did manage to seduce women with that mind control thing. Now vampires don't need mind control because they're hawt!
Thanks for a dark and steamy read! :)
dianacharles: Thanks for stopping in. I appreciate your comment!
packerpack: Thanks for reading.
sheena: Yes, I will come to you! (Somebody needs to tend to that bleeding lip!) As always, a pleasure!
pgrundy: Thanks for reading. As for a sequel, this was just a trifle.
countrywomen: Hi! I'm not really up on all the Vampire lore, but I would say attractive women taste better and they look better in the movies. Thanks for visiting!
Pam: Vampires may now be hawt, but the mind control still comes in handy. I can see it now, with the woman saying: "Oh..you're not going out again?" and "Who's lipstick is that on your neck?" A little mind control and she's all wearing open-necked blouses aroud the castle and "accidentally" pricking her finger in front of him.
Thanks for your kind words.
If I prick my finger will you come to me? Sheena is being down right greedy, and is that her lipstick on your neck?
Vampires, now I'm going to have nightmares as it's my bedtime now. Thanks a lot.
Cindy: Sleep with a large, garlicy sausage.
What a turn on... I guess somehow we are all attracted to the dark side. Great writing Christoph.
Christoph, this was excellent! Truly. And I liked that it wasn't too long. It didn't need to be.
I was jazzed to see my vampire piece in the RELATED HUBS line. I keep good company!
Princessa: Yes..I don't know why. Thanks for your sweet comment, Princessa! Now, I'm turned on!
Just one question Cristoph: Is the garlic sausage to scare the vampire with the garlic? to hit the vampire in the head with it he comes? or is it for cindy's personal use?
Artisan: Thanks for coming by. It's a nice surprise to see you here. Thanks for your kind words (take that, packerpack!).
And it is I who am good company if this is being related to your most excellent article on Vampires! Thanks, my friend!
Princessa: In Cindy's case, I dare say it is all three...not necessarily in that order!
Patricia: Sorry I missed you up there. If you pricked your finger, I would have to come to you. How could I resist? As for the lipstick on my neck, I don't remember. I was out with the ghouls and I had a few pints too many, so my memory is a little fuzzy.
I read this one just after I finished reading Mr. Know-It-All. I should have waited to read this one until tomorrow, because, I swear, I kept waiting for the punch line...I was sure Victor was a cat!
Always, you amaze and delight. Your adoring fan, S.
Sweet! Thumbs up Christoph.
Sally: Victor WAS a cat! Didn't you get that? Oh, man, back to the writing board!!!
S.S. Alexis: Thank you for the "sweet." I appreciate your stopping by and your comment!
Well, if I don't keep you on your toes, who will? :)
I am already hearing complaints. Ok...Victor is NOT a cat. He is a Vampire. He is manly and virile and he wants YOU!
Sally: There is a line of people who keep me on my toes!
Good fantasy writing! Now where is my cross and wooden stake?
Peggy: Why, they're right over here, Peggy, I have them. Closer....closer....
Ah you fang toothed seductor!
Peggy: I can't help it. It's in your blood.
Now I'm really scared and won't sleep a wink. I've bolted all the windows and pulled the curtains. Vampires suck the life out of me.
I'm there. I'm so there.
Marisue: Bolting the windows will not keep me...uh...the Vampires out. I think you'd make a tasty little treat!
I'll bite you back.
Promise?
Damn that was hot as. i tell you what I just came from GT's erotic piece, then went to Cindys reading about sausages, and then here...ooo....damn vampires are sexy.....between u and GT you have done more than enough to me for one day.... thankyou very much....lol. I think many a female Hubber's screens are sizzling today as Pam would say LMAO
BlondePoet: I am most gratified to be part of your erotic travels today. Thanks for reading, and your titillating comment!
Where have you been lately CR, have you been busy writing stories, never see you nomore :(
I've been here. I thought you were missing. Oh, I have been going to bed earlier, so maybe that's why you haven't seen me around.
Well done! I'm going to try this approach. :)
Chris, Maybe you were on another continent last night... but I did leave my window open. I waited, and I waited and I was very disappointed to wake up with all my blood still in my veins.
Darn! I think I took a wrong turn at Albeqerque!
Hey Chris
I really am demanding for a sequel! Or I'll quit your fan club, along with my 50 alteregos! :D
Victor? Victor? Is he here? Oh, no sequel yet. I'm waiting...waiting!
Cris: Honestly, I think it would just be the same thing in a different locale, but I'll think about it. Nice interview today, and thanks. That English is your second language makes me want to hang my head.
At least Christopher talks to you Sheena he is a true gentleman, he would never ignore us.
Heck Cris has all those egos,maybe he may be the guy who told me my Hubs need formatting the other day,maybe he is the one I told to put his finger on his head and say red backwards,maybe he is the one I did other things with.I am a little nervous now what I say to people haha.
Omg he has not talked to you yet, but hey he will Sheena, "he is the man if anyone can do it C Reilly can".
Also how come I never get bitten by a vampire, the closest I have come to that is a German Sheperd, it was not a pleasant bite I can tell you.
sheena: Well, maybe I can make him go after a sweet little girl in the Philippines! Hmmm, I'll need an inspiration...
Chris
With your gift in writing, you could take this anywhere you want and your readers will follow. What about some badass vampires? What am I saying? You are creative and you'll figure out a way not to fall for repetitiveness, unoriginality and predictability.
But hey, no pressure (BUT I WANT IT SOON!) :D
Oh the interview - Pam gets half the credit :D
B.P: Why would I? And who doesn't talk to you?
B.P. Did you add a bunch to your comment. What's going on here? You lost me.
Chris: Thanks, but I am less sure than you. I will think about it though. Pam was good, that's for sure!
What do you mean I lost you Chris, now you have lost me.What are you talking about lol a bunch of ???? Do you mean grapes,...oh boy...tell me what you are having trouble with understanding and I shall clarify.
I basically said I want a vampire to bite me in favour of a dog.
That CrisA has lots of aliases, and I hope he was not one of the blokes I have been giving a hard time, and thirdly I said you are a gentleman, as poor Sheena has posted comments on other pages and the wally whackers there have ignored her. Gee whiz my hand is dropping off here LMAO
Ok. I get it. I got the dog part already, so keep your skivvies on...or don't...or...ohhhhhhh.
hahahahahahhahahaha
badcompany: I'll definitely consider you for the part of Victor. Do you have any acting experience, or just experience biting girls on the neck? Thanks for the comment.
Ah vampires, they take your life, and you love them for it.
Does this mean that many women secretly wish to be mastered? taken? consumed? Hmmmm.
Aya: I'm not sure what the deal is with women's attraction to Vampires, but you may be hitting on it, purely in a fantasy sense, of course. Thanks for reading and the comment.
I don't know what's going on, but my computer is laying on the floor jerking and wiggling, rolling around, it's quite disgusting. I can't even stroke the keyboard for God's sake.
marisue: Ha, ha. Oh, those naughty computers! Yes, you must be careful about stroking their keyboards while they are in this condition. They are liable to go off on internet searches for who knows what all by themselves! Thanks for alerting me. Should I call the Geek Squad?
No, I'm actually quite enthralled by the whole thing. It's quite theatrical. I'm learning....
Well, thank you, Marisue. A very nice thing to say!
"There was no hurry. Eternity was a long time." A Happy biting Season to you Christoph and may there be many more....great read..cheers
ajcor: So nice to see you! Thanks for the visit and the comment! Cheerio!
Oh wow, Christoph. I was totally unprepared for that! Sensual hardly describes it.
Laughing mom: Well thank you. That's a lovely compliment! Glad you read it!
I'm very, very behind, but I'm hoping to get caught up soon!
Your poor head! I take it you're feeling better?
I am offended by your use of the word "breast" and will be reporting you to the HubPages authorities. I have a delicate sensibility and all this saliva and lust talk is provocative and makes for glandular activity of a most disturbing nature in places that must not be discussed.
Shades: You're so right. Whatever was I thinking? I never should have let the ladies talk me into writing this. I'd better get to church!
Hey Chris! Never knew that horror could involve such great passion too. Wow! You made it look so horny. Good job.
Hey Anj! Ha, ha! But how do you feel, Anj? Are you horny?
Thanks so much for reading, and for the refreshing comment!
SSShh! Do you expect me to answer that here? lol
Hi Anj! I would LIKE you to answer that here, but I don't expect you to. No, no, you are far too much the proper lady for such public admissions of a...dare I say it...(sotto voice) sexual nature! Thank you for starting off my day with an orgasm...uh...no....I mean...a laugh! A LAUGH!
Christoph..Haven't seen Twilight..but ,I am terrified of the Count thundering through the sinister night in his black chariot drawn by black horses and finding the way to a beautiful woman through her window!Till today it sends shivers thro' my spine!You have described Victor(or...ahem..you?lol..)so very romantically..but I'm still terrified!I see that I'm the lone terrfied person!LOL!A really beautiful hub!Thanks!
Laila: I won't hurt you, Laila. I'll just bite you a little bit. Ha, ha! Thanks so much for your kind words and the lovely comment!
I havent seen Twilight yet either, but all the kids are going ga ga over it. I loved the story CR. Still my favorite vamp flick is Interview with a Vampire. I was captivated by Brad Pitts contacts! lol.
They were something, weren't they? Thanks for the comment.
"Dorothy aka Dot" wants to know if she can play the girl in the bed? Or since you have a lot of cast members already here, maybe someone in leather to challenge him? *Pick me!*
Candie V: That's an offer I can't refuse. Thanks for the visit and your audition! Casting has not been completed.
If you need glossies, I shall send some... I have no acting experience, so I shall just be me, and can I have a trailer for "character" practice? Maybe some pointers from the author? (chuckle)
now I know I can hold my breath for 3 minutes.
Benson: Thank you, Sir! You are a scholar and a gentleman!
the ending. it is always about the ending. Christoph, I adore vampire tales. This one was amazing...on to the next.
AIDY: Thank you for coming and reading. Certainly glad you liked it and I appreciate your saying so. I think I'll follow you to the next.....
Oooops. You caught me drooling. Just thought Victor might be getting lonely, only having two hubs to go between. I think he'd be more comfortable if he could stretch his wings to... I don't know a THIRD hub.
Randy: Victor hears you and he feels your pain. Maybe he'll let me tell another of his stories soon.
*big grin*
Earlier today I read Shadesbreath's hub where he did a take-off on this hub and Pam's. Thus, I had to visit. I enjoyed, and I'll be back.
Mystery Lady: How wonderful to see you. I've been terribly neglectful of all my friends. I'll remedy that and visit you tonight (to bite your neck, perhaps.)
Ha, ha, yes, Shadesbreath, that dirty dog, always poking fun at me. I must read that again myself. Thanks for visiting, you Mystery you.
Very descriptive, I loved it!
LAmatadora 3 years ago
ooohh what is it about the sexy appeal that vampiros have? I loved it!